Kia Ora Jackson, I like your blog post because I do those things to prepare for Christmas too! I like how you added the Christmas tree picture because it adds colour and panache! Next time you could explain why you had to create the blog post, so that your audience knows what you are doing it for. Maybe you could ask a question to include your blog viewers?
Hi Jackson, This blog is VERY interesting how you celebrate Christmas is a lot like I do. Next time you could add some more colour. What type of food do you make for your family? Keep it up.
Jackson, your post is very colourful and clear. It was nice to add a Christmas tree for colour. You don't explain why you did this, what were you looking at in class? I look forward to hearing from you.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Jackson,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post because I do those things to prepare for Christmas too! I like how you added the Christmas tree picture because it adds colour and panache! Next time you could explain why you had to create the blog post, so that your audience knows what you are doing it for.
Maybe you could ask a question to include your blog viewers?
Hi Jackson,
ReplyDeleteThis blog is VERY interesting how you celebrate Christmas is a lot like I do. Next time you could add some more colour. What type of food do you make for your family?
Keep it up.
Hey Elijah,
DeleteThank you so much for leaving a kind comment on my blog! I thrive to make better posts in the future.
Q: What food do I make
A: For my family, I help with all the desserts for people to eat and enjoy.
Thanks for stopping by!
Jackson, your post is very colourful and clear. It was nice to add a Christmas tree for colour. You don't explain why you did this, what were you looking at in class? I look forward to hearing from you.
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